A MACK ADAMS CHRISTMAS
THE MACK ADAMS STORIES, VOLUME 5: A MACK ADAMS CHRISTMAS
The streets were quiet for the holiday as Mack left Bellmont.
East Seventh Street was far. So when he passed under the highway he was glad to stop for a rummy he knew. They talked a long time, mainly of the excellent one. As they warmed themselves over a fire made from old football programs, Mack remembered the names of all the man’s family. Before going, Mack wished him a Merry Christmas and gave him money. It was late when he reached the cantina. He was surprised to see Will there, standing next to a booth.
“Will?”
“Mack! Merry Christmas!” Will embraced his friend.
"And to you, Will."
“Mack, you walked?”
“I did,” Mack said.
“Then you saw Bill.”
Mack did not answer. Will sensed the truth and looked away.
“I know it will go for liquor, but I always give him money, Mack.”
“That’s decent of you, Will.” Mack sat down in the booth. He waved his hand toward the other seat. But Will did not join him.
“Mack, what is it that you want?”
Mack was tired. He did not want to talk about this on Christmas Eve. It felt lousy just to think about. Talking about leaving football would make the leaving worse.
“It won’t help anything,” he said.
“Mack, we need to settle on the order,” Will said.
Mack knew his friend well. Will always thought about the players. Even now the roster was important to him.
“I suppose I could move the running backs around again, Will.”
“You could do that, yes, Mack. You could do that. But I need the order tonight. For here.” Will pulled a plastic card from the back of his pants. “While you make up your mind I could bring you a Doctor Pepper. Or if you are in the mood for a hard drink, the La Crema is an excellent choice.”
Mack took the menu and reached for his reading glasses. He was puzzled.
"I don’t understand,” Mack said.
“I know what you mean, Mack. I myself am skeptical of the Sonoma Coast. But this has a nice finish.”
Mack thought for a moment. “You work here, Will?”
“A coach in waiting must know about real waiting, Mack. So I have waited.” Will pointed to the menu. “The enchiladas are good tonight.”
Mack was quiet. He scanned the menu with the owl optical light he kept in his wallet. Finally he looked up. “I think I’ll have the torta chiso and a Doctor Pepper.” He glanced away as he handed back the menu.
Will smiled. “You are concerned I spend time in the cantina, Mack? It is busy sometimes, yes. But not to worry. A man who thinks about football can think about football anywhere.”
“That’s true, Will.”
“Sometimes I try new blitz packages with the busboys. We put the fear of God into the waitresses, I can tell you, Mack.”
“I’ll bet you do,” Mack said. He looked around him. “Will? Who else do you see here?”
“Oh, just some of the regulars, Mack."
"Who comes here, Will?"
"Well, the Brent, Kirk, and Miss Erin were in yesterday." Will whistled under his breath.
"How's that, Will?"
Will lowered his voice. “Don’t get me wrong, Mack, she’s no Mrs. V. But Miss Erin always makes the football good.”
Mack knew exactly what Will meant. Miss Erin had never made the football bad for him. “I could see that, Will.”
“Sometimes I forget her order. It’s hard to remember things when the girls are so pretty.” Will paused. “Can I tell you a secret, Mack? When I lean down to listen better, even her hair smells pretty.”
Mack smiled. He knew that Will was right. But he did not want to tell his friend that he knew this. “I believe you, Will,” Mack said.
“Mack, let me put in your order. Then I'll come sit with you. It's my last night here. I’ll put the ice in the way you like, and we’ll talk about old times. You can tell me again about Paris and Barcelona. You miss them, don’t you?”
“I do, Will.”
“I understand,” Will said. “Myself, I miss Athens and Rome." He put his hand on his friend's shoulder. "Look, I will go get our drinks. Then we will sit and talk. You are in for a surprise, Mack. A Christmas present for us. The Major will be here soon. He likes the flan.”
When Will returned with the drinks, Mack saw that the ice had been put in just right. They could sit in the booth together now and talk for a long time without getting drunk. They would talk about football and cities as they sipped their cold drinks to the sounds of a holiday telenovela. As they talked they would think about Christmas, and about how good a pretty girl could smell when you stood close to her after a football game. They would have many things to talk about as they waited for the Major. It was Christmas Eve, and they would all be happy as they sat together and remembered the good times.
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Thanks for working on this, parlin. Bittersweet.
by Sailor Ripley on Dec 13, 2010 12:48 AM CST reply actions
I’m gobsmacked. Comedy? Satire? Art? Not sure. All I know is, I like the flan too.
Trying times really do bring out the best in people, it seems.
by Dagga Roosta on Dec 13, 2010 1:02 AM CST reply actions
Well done, parlin. Thanks for all of these. They make the football good.
by hopefulhorn on Dec 13, 2010 6:17 AM CST reply actions
I love these Mack Adams stories. Really good stuff and fun to read.
by Mildly Concerned on Dec 13, 2010 6:47 AM CST reply actions
Parlin – you, sir, are a genius. And obviously not an engineer. And I hope not a lawyer.
by Ag_in_TX on Dec 13, 2010 7:01 AM CST reply actions
The flan looks good. I hope it tastes as good as it looks. The flan is good with a hot Doctor Pepper.
by Tex Long on Dec 13, 2010 8:20 AM CST reply actions
In the fall, the games were on again, but we didn’t go as much as we used to. Sometimes the games were awfully bad. The tailgates in the parking lot were full of roasting chicken and cured meats and cold beer, and they were very good. So good that we stayed and ate and drank, and sometimes slept. But the games, we didn’t go as much as we used to.
by Arriviste on Dec 13, 2010 8:34 AM CST reply actions
Very good as always, but this one made me sad.
by nordberg on Dec 13, 2010 9:07 AM CST reply actions
Great stuff, Parlin. I knew Major was a flan man.
by WanderingHorn on Dec 13, 2010 9:13 AM CST reply actions
When I heard Will left, one of the first things i thought was, “Who is going to pour Mack’s Doctor Peppers just the way he likes them???”
by Egonz on Dec 13, 2010 9:47 AM CST reply actions
Fantastic, parlin. Damn, I’m going to miss these.
by burnt orange outrage on Dec 13, 2010 10:18 AM CST reply actions
Something tells me the Doctor Peppers won’t taste as good for quite a while.
Of course he went to Florida, the girls are pretty there too (so the football is good) and wasn’t Papa H. quite fond of the place?
This may be all your fault parlin.
by tdwalsh on Dec 13, 2010 11:20 AM CST reply actions
Excellent work, good sir. I think I need to cuss and have a rum drink .
by JungleHeat on Dec 13, 2010 11:35 AM CST reply actions
This was a season without enough pretty girls.
by Juan Beniquez on Dec 13, 2010 11:53 AM CST reply actions
The girl was pretty. She had Longhorn icons painted on her face. She was proud of her Longhorns.
The girl was pretty, it was true, but the football was not good. She did her best.
The girl watched the game. She furrowed her pretty brow. An opposing player had broken through the Longhorns.
The girl slapped her own forehead. She used both hands.
O. MY. GOD.
by Tex Long on Dec 13, 2010 12:01 PM CST reply actions
“The Major . . . likes the flan."
And, according to the menu at Flaco’s on University Drive in Gainesville, “mom makes the flans with love!”
Could it ultimately come down to the flan?
by Jackie Ging on Dec 13, 2010 1:29 PM CST reply actions
Mack savored the crunchy, salty tortilla chip – though the experience left a bittersweet taste in his mouth.
He knew in his heart of hearts that his friend Will had abandoned the simplicity of the tortilla chip for the complexity and flavor of the fried sweet plantain. Or, as Will’s new acquaintances referred to them, "tostones."
But, then again, Mack had to admit to himself, in a moment of Dr. Pepper infused clarity, that he had always been a chip man – while Will never really was.
by Jackie Ging on Dec 13, 2010 1:47 PM CST reply actions
El Indio is the place for the good Mexican in Gainesville. Cheap too.
Gonna miss these Parlin…can’t see how they work with anyone else.
by jinx on Dec 13, 2010 6:03 PM CST reply actions
Parlin, you know how to make a girl feel pretty. And pretty girls do make the football good.
I look forward to seeing how you’re going to weave 2 Live Crew into the next series.
by Mrs. V on Dec 13, 2010 7:38 PM CST reply actions
This made me miss Muschamp but made it impossible for me to hate him. Our sidelines will never be the same.
by CrawForce on Dec 14, 2010 7:12 PM CST reply actions
It seriously brought a tear to my eye. Seriously.
by Bocklove on Dec 15, 2010 10:42 PM CST reply actions
Everbody knows Miss Erin likes the hot links.
by Earl Campbell on Dec 16, 2010 2:42 PM CST reply actions

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